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3.假定你是李华.前几天,你在打篮球时伤了脚,目前正在住院.昨天,你的外籍教师Pete:前来探望,你非常感动.请用英语给Peter写一封信表达谢意,并告诉他:
(1)非常喜欢他赠送的书籍;
(2)王明每天放学后,都来给你补课;
(3)两周内就可康复出院.
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯.
Dear Peter,
I'm writing here to express my sinceregratitude to you for coming to see me in hospital yesterday.I really like thebooks you have brought to me,and I think they will be very helpful in my Englishlearning.You needn't worry about the lessons during my absence from school,for my classmate Wang Ming said he would come after school every day to help memake up.
By theway,the doctor told me this morning that I could recover and go back toschool within two weeks.That's really good news for me.Then I will go andshow my thanks again.
Best wishes to you!.

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料,写一封信,感谢外籍教师Peter在你住院期间前来探望.写作要点包括:非常喜欢他赠送的书籍;王明每天放学后,都来给你补课,两周内就可康复出院.写作时应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主.人称以第三人称为主.重要短语:express one's sincere gratitude to (表达真诚地感谢),worry about (担心),during one'sabsence from school (某人缺课期间),make up(弥补),by the way (顺便说).

解答 Dear Peter,
     I'm writing here to express my sinceregratitude to you for coming to see me in hospital yesterday.I really like thebooks you have brought to me,and I think they will be very helpful in my Englishlearning.【高分句型】(非常喜欢他赠送的书籍) You needn't worry about thelessons during my absence from school,for my classmate Wang Ming said hewould come after school every day to help me make up.【高分句型】(王明每天放学后都会给你补课)
   By the way,the doctor told methis morning that I could recover and go back to school within two weeks.That'sreally good news for me.Then I will go and show my thanks again.(两周内就可以康复出院) 
      Best wishes to you!

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点,并适当增加细节.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.

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