Question

16．某英文报社准备发一篇题为"Living in a City"有关城市生活利与弊的文章．根据下面提示写一篇英文短文．
优点：找工作容易；交通便利；有公园、饭店等休闲场所．
缺点：生活消费高；人口多，拥挤；空气污染，居住环境差．
要求：1．覆盖以上全部内容，可适当发挥．
      2．词数100左右，标题已给出．
                       Living in a City
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages． 居住在城市有优点也有缺点．
高分句型二：
It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside．对人们来说很难找到一个像乡下一样能享受平静和新鲜空气的地方．
句型一 Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages 该句的主语为动名词短语充当，动名词以及动名词短语做主语，应注意谓语使用单数
句型二   where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside 该句是一个由where 引导的定语从句，where在从句中充当地点状语

解答 Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages．（高分句型一） It is often easier to find work．There are always many choices of public transport．Besides，there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see．You can eat in good restaurants，visit museums，go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax．（城市生活优点）However，living in a city is often very expensive．You must find a well-paid job，otherwise，you will not be able to afford the things you will do．What's more，the city is always crowded，noisy and dirty．It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside．（城市生活缺点）（高分句型二）
   Anyway，you can make the choice that suits you best．

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．