Question

【题目】假定你是学校英语报记者，你校最近举办了一次趣味运动会，给同学们减压。请以“A Successful Fun Game”为标题写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：

1. 时间与地点：12月25日，学校操场；

2. 活动大致介绍。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】A Successful Fun Game

Interesting games for all students were held on the school playground on December 25. There were various fun and exciting sports games, among which Riding Pigs. Mud Wrestling and Cheese Rolling attracted more students than the other ones. Although it was very cold outside, the playground was filled with the students’ laughers and cheers.

The Fun Game is organized for the first time to give the students a break from their heavy schoolwork pressure. It seemed to be a great success. Hopefully, the laughers from the Fun Game will stay with them in their later study.

【解析】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去式和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.介绍这次趣味运动会。

1）运动会举办时间和地点。（on the school playground on December 25.）

2）运动会的项目。（Riding Pigs, Mud Wrestling and Cheese Rolling）

3) 运动会的感受。（was filled with the students’ laughers and cheers.）

2.表示期待。（the laughers will stay with them in their later study.）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be held; various; be filled with; be organized; for the first time; give sb. a break; a great success.; stay with.

第三步：连词成句

1. Games for all students were held on the school playground on December 25.

2. The playground was filled with the students’ laughers and cheers.

3. The Fun Game is organized for the first time to give the students a break from their heavy schoolwork pressure.

4. The laughers from the Fun Game will stay with them in their later study.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改