Question

7．假定你是李华．你的美国笔友Tom给你发了封邮件，询问你假期做了些什么、新学期有什么打算．因为准备开学后的考试，你未能及时回复．请根据以下要点给他回邮件提示：
（1）未能及时回复的原因；
（2）假期外出旅游、阅读小说、复习功课；
（3）新学期努力学习，争取考上理想大学．
注意：（1）词数100字左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
      ．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Recently，I've been so busy with an important exam at the beginning of the new term that I failed to reply to your letter in time．
高分句型二：
In the new term，I'll work hard and try to make greater progress，hoping to be admitted to my dream university．
句型一 I've been so busy with an important exam at the beginning of the new term that I failed to reply to your letter in time．该句中有一个so…that..的固定句型，that后面跟的是一个结果状语从句
句型二 hoping to be admitted to my dream university．该部分使用了hoping 这个现在分词作伴随状语
除此之外，还有以下重要短语和高级词汇：make progress；   be admitted to

解答 Dear Tom，
I'm so glad to receive your email．I'm really sorry for this late reply．
Recently，I've been so busy with an important exam at the beginning of the new term that I failed to reply to your letter in time．（说明未回信原因）（高分句型一）As a senior III student，I had to devote most of my time to reviewing my lessons during the summer vacation．However，I still managed to spare some time to travel to several places of interest and read novels to refresh myself．
In the new term，I'll work hard and try to make greater progress，hoping to be admitted to my dream university．（自我目标设定）（高分句型二）
Best wishes                                                             
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．