Question

【题目】假如你是一名大学生，名叫李华。你所在的班级最近就“大学生是否应经济独立”的话题展开讨论，同学们发表了不同的看法。请你根据以下所给内容，写一封信给某英语报社，反映讨论情况。

60%的同学的看法	1.靠自己打工来支付学费会影响学业； 2.现在把精力都用在学习上，将来报答父母的养育之恩；
25%的同学的看法	1.通过打工可以获得工作经验，了解社会； 2.体会父母挣钱不易，从而戒掉乱花钱的坏习惯；
15%的同学的看法 （包括你在内）	觉得双方的观点都有一定的道理，但又不完全赞同； 我个人的看法是……

注意：1．文章的起始句已经给出；

2．词数100左右（不包括起始句）；

参考词汇： 报答: repay 学费: tuition 经济独立: financially independent

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about a recent discussion our class have had on whether or not university students should be financially independent.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about a recent discussion our class have had on whether or not university students should be financially independent.

60% of the students think that university students don’t have to be financially independent, because trying to make money will affect their studies. They also think that they can repay their parents in the future.

25% of my classmates hold the view that doing part-time jobs will help one gain work experience and learn more of society. Besides, when students find it hard to make money, they won’t waste their money any longer.

15% of the students, including myself, partly agree with the opinions above. Personally I think that as grownups, we should not depend on our parents any more. However, if our parents can afford to pay the tuition for us, we should put our studies in the first place.

Thank you for reading my letter

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇给英语报社的书信，反映就“大学生是否应经济独立”的话题所展开的讨论情况。根据所给提纲，充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇书信，格式正确，要点齐全，语句精炼，布局合理，文中使用高级句子。on whether or not university students should be financially independent.句中运用介词的宾语从句；60% of the students think that university students don’t have to be financially independent, because trying to make money will affect their studies.宾语从句和原因状语从句完美结合；25% of my classmates hold the view that doing part-time jobs will help one gain work experience and learn more of society.同位语从句和动名词短语做主语同句出现；if our parents can afford to pay the tuition for us, we should put our studies in the first place.if条件句恰到好处；另外，Besides, Personally，However,的运用为文章增色添彩。