Question

【题目】The 18yearold girl from Linyi，Shandong Province scored 568 points on her college entrance exam this year and was admitted to Nanjing University of Posts and Telecommunications.

On Aug.19，Xu received a phone call from an unknown person telling her that she was due to receive student funding.Following the call，Xu transferred a 9,900yuan “activation fee” into the man’s bank account，hoping the money would appear in her student account，but it never did.

After discovering they had been cheated，the family immediately reported the incident to the police，but Xu was said to be frustrated.On their way home，she suddenly fainted and despite doctors’ best efforts to rescue her，she passed away.

The death of Xu Yuyu immediately caused an outcry over the society，and once again，it fired a public anger towards those who commit heartless fraud(欺诈)．

So how was Xu’s private information leaked out?

Reporters have discovered that there are many people who openly sell the examinee’s information online.The information includes the examinee’s name，school，phone number，and address.The personal information of examinee has become the target of the online fraud industry.

写作内容

1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2．用约120个词就“Personal information leakage”谈谈你的看法和感受，内容包括：

(1)简述个人信息泄露的危害及保护个人信息的重要性；

(2)就如何保护个人信息提几点建议(至少两点)。

写作要求

1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3．不必写标题。

评分标准

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】A girl from Shandong，who would soon begin her university life，was cheated out of 9,900 yuan due to personal information leakage.The heavy blow claimed her life，which aroused anger in society.

The leakage of personal information is of great harm.Not only will people be frequently troubled by unwanted short messages or calls，but also people may be cheated out of money or be put in danger.Thus，the protection of personal information is of vital importance in order for common people to maintain a peaceful and safe life，as well as to protect one’s own fortune.

Here are the tips on how to protect one’s personal information.Never click any link on phones or computers unless it can be utterly trusted.Also，avoid connecting smart phones to any untrusted WiFi in public places.Apart from the efforts of common people，the government must spare no effort to fight against criminals selling others’ personal information.

【解析】试题分析：根据所给文章用约30个单词写出文章概要，并用约120个词就“Personal information leakage”谈谈你的看法和感受。首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写、错写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇提纲式作文，采用三段式，内容符合要求，结构布局合理，使用高级句子。A girl from Shandong，who would soon begin her university life，was cheated out of 9,900 yuan due to personal information leakage.who引导的非限制性定语从句和被动语态在句中结合；Not only will people be frequently troubled by unwanted short messages or calls，but also people may be cheated out of money or be put in danger.部分倒装使用巧妙；Never click any link on phones or computers unless it can be utterly trusted unless引导条件状语从句；另外，Thus，as well as，Also，等的运用为文章增色添彩。