Question

【题目】随着近年来城市发展速度的加快,很多反映城市历史风貌的古建筑屡遭破坏。就这个问题请你以"How to Protect the Ancient Buildings"为题向报社写一封建议信。

要点如下:

1.很多古建筑被拆;

2.呼吁拯救这些古建筑;

3.希望有合理的解决方法。

注意:1.词数100左右;

可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

In recent years, as the city develops faster and faster, many old and historic buildings are being damaged by people. They want to make room for housing or offices in urban construction. Do you think we should try to protect those old buildings or replace them with the modern ones?

I think we should take measures to protect those ancient buildings, because they reflect the history and culture of the city. And the young will learn a lot when they visit the historical relic sites. The government and related departments should find a suitable solution to these problems. As a citizen, it is my and everyone’s duty to spare no efforts to take any way to protect the historical property.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于议论文格式，根据提示信息和要求来写作。写作时注意以下几点：：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点。2、依据提示信息或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言适用一般现在时。 4、注意变换句式，增加高级词汇与短语，以突出文章亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。如比较级的使用：as the city develops faster and faster, many old and historic buildings are being damaged by people；如原因状语的使用：I think we should take measures to protect those ancient buildings, because they reflect the history and culture of the city；此外，文中还使用了大量的短语，如 make room for， take measures to，a solution to， spare no efforts to， take any way to，the historical relic sites等等，使得文章地道，彰显笔者水平。