Question

【题目】短文改错

Dear John，

I am so glad hear from you. Learn that you are working on Chinese, I strongly recommend the novel Journey to the West. The novel is one of the Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese literature. It tells about a Buddhist monk and his three disciples, animal with human characteristic，traveling west to India in search for Buddhist scriptures. I think, the study of this novel open the way to Chinese values and history, from what you will get a better understanding of Chinese culture. Beside, the novel offers a mixture of adventure and comedy, so while enjoying reading, you will surprisingly find you can speak and write in Chinese more fluent.

I hope you keep reading to enjoy the charm of Chinese language but you will achieve a great progress in your Chinese.

Answer 1

【答案】1. glad和hear之间添加to

2. Learn→Learning

3. animal→animals

4. for→of

5. open→opens

6. what→ which

7. Beside→Besides

8. fluent→fluently

9. but→and

10. great前的a删除

【解析】

这是一封推荐信，写信人推荐了《西游记》。

第一处：考查固定搭配。be glad to do sth为固定搭配，意为“高兴做某事”，故glad和hear之间添加to。

第二处：考查非谓语。分析可知recommend是句子的谓语动词，learn在句中做状语，是非谓语。learn与其逻辑主语之间I之间是逻辑上的主谓关系，要用其现在分词形式。故将Learn改成Learning。

第三处：考查名词单复数。animal为可数名词，根据语境这里要表达的是“有人类特性的动物们”，表达的是复数意义，应该用其复数形式。故将animal改成animals。

第四处：考查介词。in search of为固定搭配，意为“寻找”，故将for改成of。

第五处：考查时态和主谓一致。open的主语是the study of this novel，the study of this novel表达的是单数意义，谓语动词也要用单数，且本句为一般现在时。故将open改成opens。

第六处：考查定语从句。from what you will get a better understanding of Chinese culture是一个非限定性定语从句，what不能引导定语从句，what错误。分析可知先行词是前面整个句子，关系词在从句中做介词from的宾语，要用which引导这个定语从句。故将what改成which。

第七处：考查副词。句意：此外，这本小说融合了冒险和喜剧。Beside位于句首修饰整个句子，修饰整个句子应该用副词而不是介词，beside 是介词，意指“在...旁边”既不符合句意,语法上也用法错误。besides 是副词，指“除...以外, 还有...”符合句意，故将Beside改成Besides。

第八处：考查副词。修饰动词write应该用副词，故将fluent改成fluently。

第九处：考查连词。句意：希望你继续阅读以享受中文的魅力并且你的中文将会取得很大的进步。根据句意，I hope you keep reading to enjoy the charm of Chinese language和you will achieve a great progress in your Chinese.之间是并列关系，不是转折关系，应该用and连接这两个句子。故将but改成and。

第十处：考查冠词。progress不可数，应该用零冠词修饰progress。故将a去掉。