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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today I was in the shopping center with my neighbor, who was there to collect several item for a friend. One of the friend’s parents were struck by a serious disease. While staying there, I became aware a young mom with her daughter. She was paying the attention to her as they shopped. I stopped her to offer my appreciation to him for the fact which she was so devoted to her little girl. I went on to say that I feel sad to see moms texting or talking on their cell phones and completely ignore their children. I praised her and told the little girl that she had the good mom in the whole world. The mom smiled, obvious feeling happy at my words.

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【解析】本文主要讲了作者去逛街时，看到了一位年轻的妈妈很认真的看护自己的女儿，作者表扬了她，并且告诉这个小女孩，她有全世界最好的妈妈。

考查名词单复数。被several修饰，所以用复数形式，item改成 items。

考查固定结构。One of + 可数名词的复数 + 谓语动词单数，是固定结构，所以were改成was。

考查固定短语。我注意到一个年轻的妈妈和她的女儿。become aware of知道、发觉,是固定短语，所以aware后面加of。

考查固定短语。pay attention to注意，是固定用法，所以删除the。

考查代词。我停下来表示我对她的欣赏。“年轻的妈妈”是女的，所以him改成her。

考查同位语从句。that she was so devoted to her little girl. 是一个同位语从句，引导词在从句中不作任何成分，也没有什么实际意义，所以which改成that。

考查宾语从句的时态。that I felt sad to see moms texting or talking on their cell phones and completely ignore their children. 是一个宾语从句，主句用的一般过去时，从句要使用相应的过去的时态，所以feel改成felt。

考查固定用法。and连接并列结构，see sb. doing看到某人正在做某事，是固定用法，所以ignore改成 ignoring。

考查最高级。我表扬了她，并且告诉这个小女孩，她有全世界最好的妈妈。这里需要使用最高级，所以good改成best。

考查副词。修饰动词feeling，用副词，所以obvious 改成obviously。