Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir,

I apply to be one of the host family for the Chinese students.

Built in a attractive neighborhood, our large house meet their needs. Our car can take them to some places of interesting. With a good command of Chinese, I’ll have no difficulty communicate with them. Above all, we hosted two British students last year, through that we’ve gained many experience. In addition to, they’ll enjoy Chinese food as my mother has wonderful cooking skills. I would greatly appreciate if I could have the chance to host him.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】1. family---families

2. a---an

3. meet---meets

4. interesting---interest

5. communicate---communicating

6. that---which

7. many---much

8. In addition to---去掉 to

9. appreciate 后加 it

10. him-them

【解析】1.one of后跟名词复数，故把family---families。

2. attractive是元音开头，故把a---an.

3.句子用一般现在时态，主语是our large house，单数第三人称，故把meet---meets。

4.固定结构：a place of interest名胜古迹，故把interesting---interest。

5.固定搭配：have difficulty (in) doing sth.做某事有困难，故把communicate---communicating。

6.此处是定语从句，介词后面指物，用which引导定语从句，through是介词，故把that---which。

7.句意：我们获得很多经验。此处experience是经验，不可数名词，故把many---much。

8. In addition to除---之外；In addition 另外，此外，根据句意可知把In addition to中的to去掉。

9.固定句式：would appreciate it if---，如果---我将万分感激，故在appreciate 后加 it。

10. 根据前面的them可知句意是“如果我们有机会招待他们，我将非常感激。”故把him-them。