Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你所在的班明天英语课前有一个简短的演讲。请你写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿，内容包括：

1. 演讲的主题；

2. 健康生活习惯的重要性；

3. 2—3条健康生活习惯的建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everyone!

I’m glad to stand here to share with you my ideas about healthy living habits. In my eyes, healthy living habits can keep us fit, protect us from getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy.

So we may take fresh fruits, meat and vegetables, and avoid eating too many snack foods. Then taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health. When you arrive home from public place, please wash the hands, especially before touching your own eyes, nose or mouth. And when you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth.

Wish you all the best. Thank you!

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 演讲的主题；

2. 健康生活习惯的重要性；

3. 2—3条健康生活习惯的建议。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

share with; healthy living habits; keep sb fit; protect…from; energy; fresh fruits; avoid doing; take exercise; regularly; wash the hands; sneeze; cough; good manner; handkerchief; cover.

第三步：连词成句

I’m glad to stand here to share with you my ideas about healthy living habits.

In my eyes, healthy living habits can keep us fit, protect us from getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy.

We may take fresh fruits, meat and vegetables, and avoid eating too many snack foods.

Taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health.

When you arrive home from public place, please wash the hands, especially before touching your own eyes, nose or mouth.

When you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth.

Wish you all the best. Thank you!

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改