Question

假定你是李华， 你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”的活动。你们班为此组织主题班会，请你就如何创建“平安校园”在班会上谈谈你的想法。发言应包括下面的内容：

1.安全意识的重要性；

2.校内潜在的一些人身安全隐患，如: 体育运动时，和同学发生矛盾时等情况。

3.你对解决这些问题的积极建议。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

注释： 校园安全： safety at school

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Answer 1

Dear classmates,

Whether our school campus is a safe place to stay on means a lot to both teachers and students. And the campaign “safety at school” launched recently will make us aware that safety should always come first whatever we do.

Accidents can happen easily at school. When doing sports, we might get injured. When decorating our classroom standing on the desk, we might fall to the ground and get hurt. When having disagreement with our classmates, we might quarrel and cause fighting.

So, I think, to follow our PE teachers’ advice can avoid unnecessary injures in PE class. And it will be helpful to have some students around when we have to do things on high places. Besides, quarrelling or even fighting is not a wise choice to solve the disagreement with our classmates since it may bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically.

Thanks.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。假定你是李华， 你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”的活动。你们班为此组织主题班会，请你就如何创建“平安校园”在班会上谈谈你的想法。发言应包括下面的内容：1.安全意识的重要性；2.校内潜在的一些人身安全隐患，如: 体育运动时，和同学发生矛盾时等情况。3.你对解决这些问题的积极建议。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】Whether our school campus is a safe place to stay on means a lot to both teachers and students.这里含有一个主语从句；And the campaign “safety at school” launched recently will make us aware that safety should always come first whatever we do.这里含有一个宾语从句。

考点：话题类书面表达