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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Lei Xingyu, who is sixteen, a middle school student in Northern China. She is one of the best student in her class and she was won an award for young scientists last year. When sitting in the classroom, she looks just like all his classmates but after’ class her life is obvious different. She was born without the ability to use her legs but she has no feeling below her waist. She has to use a wheelchair to do everyday things, such as getting dressing, getting out of bed and go to school. So far she had created many programs. And one of which received an award at her province’s science fair.

Answer 1

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【解析】文章讲述了16岁的中学生雷星宇身残志坚，认真学习刻苦钻研，研究多项科学项目并获奖的故事。

1.a前加is.考查谓语动词。句中who is sixteen是定语从句，句中缺少谓语，与主语Lei Xingyu一致动词也用单数，故a前加is.

2. student →students.考查名词。此处是one of句型，表示“…之一”，其中名词用复数，故student →students.

3.去掉was.考查动词。句中动词won是实义动词，在句中作谓语。此处不表示被动，故去掉was.

4. his→her.考查代词。与句中主语she一致，Lei Xingyu是女孩用代词her指代，故his→her.

5. obvious →obviously.考查副词。此处修饰形容词different用副词，指明显地不同，故obvious →obviously.

6. but →and.考查连词。Lei Xingyu天生腿不能活动，腰部以下没有知觉。前后句是并列关系不是转折，故but →and.

7. dressing →dressed.考查动词形式。get dressed指穿衣服，get后用过去分词dressed表被动，故dressing →dressed.

8. go →going.考查动词形式。与and前的两个getting并列，也用动词的-ing形式，故go →going.

9. had →has.考查动词时态。根据句中时间状语So far可知用现在完成时，和主语she一致助动词用has, 故had →has.

10. which →them考查代词。句中没有先行词，不是定语从句。在句中做主语指项目之一，用one of them，故which →them.