Question

【题目】近日，温州某中学发放800万奖学金奖励高分新生，鼓励更多优秀学生进入该校学习。此事在你校学生中引起广泛讨论。请你结合下表用英语写一篇150词左右的短文。

	30%的学生赞成	70%的学生不赞成	你的观点
理由	1．激发学生学习热情； 2．有助学校提高名声；	1．金钱不是学习目的； 2．容易诱导学生作弊；	1．…… 2．……

注意：

1）作文应涵盖的所有要点，可适当发挥，注意衔接与连贯；

2）词数150词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

3）作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

Recently, a high school in Yangzhou, Jiangsu province has given out 5 million RMB to award high-scoring students.__________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, a high school in Wenzhou, Zhejiang province has given out 8 million RMB to award high-scoring students.Opinions differ on this topic.

30% of the students are in favor of it, holding the view that this action can inspire students’ enthusiasm for study. Becoming top students means earning more money for their families, which can improve their living conditions. Moreover, awarding students money can increase schools’ fame so that more top students will be attracted to study there.

However, 70% students are strongly against it. They think as high school students, they’d better focus all their energy on knowledge rather than money. What’s more, this action may lead to some students cheating in exams, which will have bad effects on their future development.

On my personal note, schools should not give students too much money as awards, which will cause students to have incorrect values. Instead, some other measures can be taken to inspire students to study harder, for example, reducing tuition fees. It is knowledge that counts.

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【解析】试题分析：

本文的写作背景是温州某中学发放800万奖学金奖励高分新生，鼓励更多优秀学生进入该校学习，此事在学校引起了广泛讨论。这里要求我们写一篇文章介绍讨论结果，并说明自己对此事的看法。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。完整叙述二个方面：我校的讨论结果以及我的观点（背景事件已经给出）。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：写作背景（已经给出），引出下文；第二部分：介绍学校的讨论结果（分别介绍赞成的和不赞成的原因）；第三部分：个人观点（赞成和反对均可，但是须给出原因）。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：现在分词holding做伴随状语以及同位语从句30% of the students are in favor of it, holding the view that this action can inspire students’ enthusiasm for study.；非限制性定语从句Becoming top students means earning more money for their families, which can improve their living conditions.；On my personal note, schools should not give students too much money as awards, which will cause students to have incorrect values.；强调句型It is knowledge that counts.。2.使用了过渡词语：Moreover，However，What’s more，Instead等。3.使用了重要短语：in favor of赞成；be attracted to喜爱；focus on专注于；rather than而不是；have bad effects on有负面影响。