Question

13．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Steven 即将来北京学习汉语，发邮件请你给他介绍一本学习汉语口语的书，你觉得网上热销的《汉语会话常用语》《Expressions in Chinese Conversation》适合他．请根据提示，并增加必要信息，给他回复邮件．

定价	内容	形式	如何得到
15元	准确、丰富，适合初学者	配有磁带，适合自学	（自拟）

词数：120-150；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Steven，
                                                                                     
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封回信，第一段问候之后，第二段就要解答对方的问题，这里是要询问适合学习汉语的书，文章里应该有建议和建议的理由．There are many books intended for foreigners who learn Chinese，of which I think Expressions in Chinese Conversation is a better choice．这句话里很恰当的用一句非限制性定语从句，这段里共给了四个理由，值得注意的是在四个理由链接的时候，作者用了：besides，what's more使得句与句很连贯．文章第三段里给出购买的方式和途径，并提供必要的帮助．
文章在遣词造句方面也动了脑筋，用了一些高级词汇和短语，如：are satisfied with、accurate language and abundant contents、is quite suitable for、it's convenient for you to learn、if you have any difficulty in finding the book这些短语的使用都体现作者熟练使用所学知识的能力．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
There are many books intended for foreigners who learn Chinese，of which I think Expressions in Chinese Conversation is a better choice．（高分句型一）
What's more，it's convenient for you to learn by yourself with the tape contained in it．（高分句型二）
Please contact me if you have any difficulty in finding the book．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Steven，
      I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing to learn Chinese．
      There are many books intended for foreigners who learn Chinese，of which I think Expressions in Chinese Conversation is a better choice．（高分句型一）This book has been a best seller on the Internet in recent years．Most readers are satisfied with its accurate language and abundant contents．Besides，the book is quite suitable for beginners because it starts from the very beginning．What's more，it's convenient for you to learn by yourself with the tape contained in it．（高分句型二）
      If you're interested in it，you can buy it via the Internet for 15 yuan．It's also available in local bookstores in Beijing．Please contact me if you have any difficulty in finding the book．（高分句型三）
     Wish you a nice time in China．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．