Question

【题目】假如你是王平，目前正在纽约一所中学做交换生。你校汉语俱乐部发布广告，招聘暑期汉语代课老师，你对此很感兴趣。请你用英语给该招聘负责人发一封电子邮件，

主要内容包括：

1.表明发邮件的意图；

2.介绍自身优势；

3.询问详细相关信息（开课及结束时间、每天上课节数及报酬等）。

注意：

1.字数100词左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头结尾已经给出，不计入文字总数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have read about your advertisement for a part-time Chinese teacher this summer holiday.________________

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Yours sincerely,

Wang Ping

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I have read about your advertisement for a part-time Chinese teacher this summer holiday.I am very interested in it,and I hope I can get the position.

I’m confident that I’ll do well in this job.First,I’m a native Chinese speaker,and I can speak Putonghua properly and fluently.Second,I’ve had much experience of teaching Chinese to foreigners before,and they speak highly of my way of teaching.Besides,I’m good at English,and I can communicate with foreigners in both languages.

By the way,would you please tell me more about the course,such as the beginning and ending time,the number of classes every day,the pay I,ll get and so on?

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Ping

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求写一篇电子邮件。要注意电子邮件的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点：1.表明发邮件的意图；2.介绍自身优势；3.询问详细相关信息（开课及结束时间、每天上课节数及报酬等）。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如:be interested in对……感兴趣，do well in在某方面做的好。还使用了宾语从句I’m confident that I’ll do well in this job.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。