Question

最近，“光盘行动”在社会上引起很大反响。请你在班上演讲，阐述学习食堂食物浪费现
象严重，号召大家加入“光盘行动”。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇演讲稿:
1. 列举学校餐厅食物浪费现象；
2.阐述浪费食物的危害：不利于性格发展，增加父母经济负担，浪费资源；
注意：1.词数不少于120  2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3. 提出减少食物浪费的措施（至少两点）
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Answer 1

Dear friends,
May I have your attention, please? Now I’d like to share my opinion about food waste.
There is no denying that food waste has become a serious problem on campus. We can see some students dumping leftovers without feeling guilty.So it is high time to call for an end to it.
The reasons are as follows. In the first place, the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad influence on our own character building. Secondly, it adds financial burden of our parent.Last but not least, not only does it exhaust the world’s limited natural resources, it can also contribute to global warming.
In my opinion, it is everyone’s business to fight with it. One one hand, we should start it with ourselves to save food, for instance, do not order too much, pack up the leftovers, don’t be picky about food. On the other hand, we can persuade others to join the fight with us.
Tough and big as the task is, I’m sure, with ever everyone doing his bit. We will change thepresent situation for the better.
That’s all.Thank you .

试题分析：这是一篇演讲稿稿，所以在语言的使用上要大众化，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。话题是光盘行动。列举学校餐厅食物浪费现象；.阐述浪费食物的危害。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要充实文章内容，需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。还要用适当的关联词把句子串联起来，使文章更加连贯。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
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