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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Chris,

I learn that some people laugh at me for being overweight. Don’t be so worried about your figure.

I know a group calling HOOP from the Internet, which is established to be the voice of the overweight persons. It made up of a group of friendly and supportive people, all understanding the struggle of being overweight. So you will not feel lonely when you exercise. There are a plenty of activities and trainer who don’t push you to do what you dislike. With their support and encourage it’s easy for you to leave your comfort zone and try something new.

I would high recommend HOOP to you. Whether it’s to complete a personal challenge and start a healthier lifestyle, HOOP can really help you become the best version of you. Although you keep exercising, your figure will be good than before. Best wishes!

Yours,

Vivian

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】作者讲述了加入HOOP组织锻炼减肥的经历和收获。

1.me→you.考查代词。此处是给朋友Chris的信，别人嘲笑Chris因为他胖。指代Chris用you,故me→you.

2. calling →called.考查非谓语动词。句中a group和动词call是被动关系用过去分词表被动，指这个团队被叫做HOOP.故calling →called.

3.it后加is/was.考查动词。此处指HOOP由一群友好支持的人组成，此处表被动，be made up of“由…组成”，故it后加is/was.

4.去掉a.考查固定短语。plenty of “许多，大量”是固定短语，前面不加冠词a，故去掉a.

5. trainer →trainers.考查名词。根据There are 和 plenty of可知都表示复数，名词也用复数。故trainer →trainers.

6. encourage →encouragement.考查名词。由their修饰，和and前的support并列用名词，故encourage →encouragement.

7. high →highly.考查副词。此处修饰动词 recommend用副词，表示强力推荐，故high →highly.

8. and →or.考查连词。此处指是要完成个人挑战还是开始一个更健康的生活方式，Whether …or…表示“是…还是…”，故and →or.

9. Although →Once/If/When.考查连词。此处指一旦/如果/当你不断地锻炼时，你的体形会比以前好许多。不是“尽管”应该用“一旦/如果/当…时”，故Although →Once/If/When.

10.good→better.考查形容词最高级。根据句中than before可知是含有比较的意思，指比以前更好，所以用比较级。故good→better.