Question

文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Li Hua won the first place in our city in this year College Entrance Exam. And she has admitted by Peking University. As a good friend of hers, I’d like to talk about her study in the senior school. First of all, she was very confident and studies very hard. She was determined to go to Peking University but she was sure she could manage. What’s more, she had a carefully plan about what to do every day. She had formed a good habit of studying. For an example, she never put off all what she should do today till tomorrow and seldom did she stay up later at night. She also pleased to help others, as a result of that, all the teachers and students liked her.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 year →year’s

 has∨admitted→been

 studies→studied

 but→and

 carefully→careful

 For an example→去掉an

 all去掉或what→that

 later→late

 She∨also→was

 that→which

【解析】

试题分析：文中叙述了作者的好朋友李华考上了北大，作者回顾总结她平时是如何学习的。

 因为时间有所有格的形式应该用year’s.

 she 与admit之间是被动关系，故用被动语态。她被大学录取。

 在高中学习时，当然用过去式studied.

 but表转折关系，and表递进或并列，根据上下文的关系故用and.

 carefully修饰副词或动词，careful用来修名词。故用careful修饰plan.

 For example是固定短语。

 把all去掉后面就是what引导的宾语从句； what改为that，all就是先行词，that引导的是定语从句。

 later后来；late晚的；stay up late熬夜。根据句意故用late.

 be pleased to do sth很高兴做某事，这里缺少was.

 这里是非限制性定语从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，也不能放在介词之后，而which可以，故用which.

考点：这是一篇记叙文。

点评：文中考查了多个固定短语，形容词、副词、代词及动词等的用法，需要考生有扎实的基础知识。