Question

【题目】某英语杂志正在举办“分享我的格言”的活动，你最喜欢的英语格言是Robert Collier的“Success is the sum of small efforts, repealed day in and day out”。请根据下面的写作提示写一篇投稿，内容包括：

1.你如何理解这句格言；

2 .举例说明你的观点。

注意：词数100左右。

Dear Editor,

I'm Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. I feel it a great honor to get involved in such a meaningful activity.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

Tm Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. I feel it a great honor to get involved in such a meaningful activity. My favorite saying is “Success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out” by Robert Collier. It tells us that success is the result of continuous hard work.

As far as I am concerned, no one can achieve success easily. Many people succeeded because they made extraordinary efforts. It was their persistence that finally led to success. Take the Curies for example. When they were researching into radioactivity, they did experiment after experiment. They worked hard all day long with less modem equipment. They didn't give up easily in the face of failure. Instead they kept on trying. Finally, they discovered radium after years of hard work.

So if we want to succeed, we must make persistent efforts. I am sure our hard work will pay off.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】 这是一篇以书信格式写的投稿作文，题目要求是对自己喜欢的格言介绍并且举例说明，作者喜欢的格言是Success is the sum of small efforts, repealed day in and day out，意思是成功是每天的进步总和。此篇作文主要提纲就是理解格言，并举例说明。作者对格言的理解是It tells us that success is the result of continuous hard work.积少成多，方能成功。同时作者列举了 Curies 即居里夫人的事例。文章中多次使用高级词汇，复杂句式 ，例如feel it a great honor to 意思是对.....感到荣幸，As far as I am concerned意思是就我而言，give up意思是放弃等等，同时文章段落清晰，是片不错的文章。