Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

More and more students are doing part-time jobs today. There are many advantage in students doing part-time jobs. Except earning some money to support themselves, they can learn stuff what cannot be learned from textbooks. We will learn to get along with different kinds of people, get useful working experience and to learn the value of labor.

Therefore, there are also some disadvantages. For example, too much work may take up much of the students’ study time and affected their studies. Another disadvantage is that money earned, if not proper used, may lead to some bad habits, or even greed.

Good or bad, it is not easy for students to getting part-time jobs in China now. To change the situation, people should develop fresh look at students doing part-time jobs and provide them with opportunities.

Answer 1

【答案】1. advantage → advantages

2. Except → Besides

3. what → that/which

4. We → They

5. 删除and后的to

6. Therefore → However

7. affected → affect

8. proper → properly

9. getting → get

10. develop后加a

【解析】

这是一篇议论文。文章主要讲述了学生做兼职工作的利弊，并呼吁大家用新的眼光看待这件事情，并给学生提供机会。

1. 考查名词的数。根据many判断此处应用advantage的复数形式，故填advantages。

2. 考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处是定语从句，先行词stuff在从句中充当主语，应用指物的关系代词，故将what改为that/which。

3. 考查介词。结合上下文可知，此处应是“除了…….还”表示包括，故将Except改为Besides。

4. 考查代词。结合上下文可知，此处应用第三人称代指前文的出现的人，故将We改为They。

5. 考查谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，此处用and连接三个并列的谓语动词，由will判断用动词原形，故删除and后的to。

6. 考查副词。结合上下文可知，此处是转折关系，故将Therefore改为However。

7. 考查谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，此处用and连接两个并列的谓语动词，由may判断用动词原形，故将affected改为affect。

8. 考查副词。此处应用副词修饰动词used，故将proper改为properly。

9. 考查不定式。此处考查固定句型it is + adj. + for sb. to do sth. “对于某人来说做某事……”，其中不定式是句子主语，it是形式主语，故将getting改为get。

10. 考查冠词。句意：为了改变这种情况，人们应该培养对学生做兼职工作的一种新看法。结合句意可知，此处是“一种新的看法”，是泛指，应用不定冠词，又fresh是辅音音素开头，故在develop后加a。