[题目]短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Dear John,

Yesterday I had read a notice on the Internet. You wanted to look for a Chinese friend online who can actual help you learn the Chinese language, cultures or customs.

I’m looking forward to be your friend on the Internet but I wonder whether or not you would like to accept me. If I become our friend on the Internet, I’ll try my best to help you for Chinese in my spare time. At same time, I’ll introduce some cultures and custom of China to you step by step.

So if you are interesting in this, please let me know your QQ number and I really expect what we can make good friends soon.

Love,

Li Hua

【答案】

【1】had read 删去had

【2】 actual改为actually

【3】 or改为and

【4】be改为 being

【5】our改为 your

【6】for改为 with

【7】At和 same中加the

【8】custom改为 customs

【9】interesting改为interested

【10】what 改为that

【解析】

试题分析：John希望能够找一个中国网友学习中文，李华写信给对方希望能够帮助对方学习中文并成为朋友。

【1】 had read 删去had 考查时态。本句的时间状语是yesterday，这是一个一般过去时的时间状语，所以谓语动词也要使用一般过去时read。本句并没有体现出过去的过去的含义。

【2】actual改为actually 考查副词。在英语中副词通常做状语修饰形容词、副词或动词，而形容词通常做表语或定语修饰名词。本句中使用副词做状语修饰动词短语help you learn the Chinese language, cultures or customs.

【3】or改为and 考查连词。句意：你想要找一个网络上的中国网友，能够实际帮助你学习中国语言、文化和风俗。上下文之间含有并列关系，所以使用并列连词and连接上下文。

【4】be改为 being 考查动名词。动词短语“look forward to期待”中的to是介词，后面要接名词或者动名词做宾语，所以本句中使用动名词being作为look forward to的宾语。

【5】our改为 your 考查代词。本句中代词your指代John。句意：如果我成为你的网上的朋友，我会在空闲时间努力帮助你学习汉语。

【6】for改为 with 考查固定搭配。动词短语help sb with sth帮助某人某事；句意：我会在空闲时间努力帮助你学习中文。

【7】At和 same中加the 考查固定短语。介词短语at the same time与此同时；句意：同时，我会逐步地向你介绍一个中国的文化和风俗。

【8】 custom改为 customs 考查名词单复数。名词“custom风俗”是一个可数名词，本句主语cultures构成并列关系，都使用复数形式。

【9】interesting改为interested 考查形容词。形容词interested感兴趣的；通常修饰人。interesting有趣的，通常修饰事物；本句中主语是you，所以使用形容词interested修饰I。

【10】what 改为that 考查宾语从句。宾语从句we can make good friends soon的结构很完整，不需要使用连接代词what，因为what要在句中做主语、宾语或者表语等，本句只需要一个连接词连接起该宾语从句即可。

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