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   Online shopping has been gaining popularity in the recent years. But what are

the advantages and disadvantages of it?

   Obviously, online shopping has a number of advantages. To begin with,

it¡¯s a convenient way to purchase goods. People can buy things without going

out. Moreover, goods online are usually sold at lower prices than in conventional

stores. Last but not least, you can see other customers¡¯ comments, which can

help you make choices.

    Nevertheless, as every coin has two sides, shopping online also has

disadvantages. For one thing, it is very hard to tell whether the goods are fake or not.

For another, customers lose some pleasure of shopping because they can¡¯t try

or check the goods before buying them. Additionally, it¡¯s not safe to pay online. Your

passwords can be stolen.

    As for me, the advantages of online shopping outweigh its disadvantages. We

should learn to make the best use of it and prevent losses.

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