Question

15．请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50
In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

What an interesting picture!A Western young man，sitting at a table，is ready to eat a bowl of noodles．（高分句型一）He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks．He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot．At first glance，I think it's a bit funny，for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles．（高分句型二）The man in the picture is trying to copy us．Obviously he is doing itin ahard way．Maybe using one fork will do a better job，In my opinion，we don't need to copy others'ways of thinking．Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way．．

Answer 1

分析 本题为开放性图画作文，考生能根据相当简短的提示和图画来写作．这种形式为张扬个性提供了空间，答案不唯一，淋漓尽致地考查了学生发散思维和创新思维的能力，图中描述的是一个外国人，用两只叉子吃中式面条．反映的现象是当前有些人照本宣科，不注重实践，不能具体问题具体分析．对于考生而言，要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性，这样作文就不难下笔了．
亮点部分
A Western young man，sitting at a table，is ready to eat a bowl of noodles．（高分句型一）句中sitting at a table，属于现在分词作定语
At first glance，I think it's a bit funny，for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles．（高分句型二）句中第一个for应该为连词，意为"因为"；take for granted…认为…理所当然  属于固定搭配

解答 What an interesting picture!A Western young man，sitting at a table，is ready to eat a bowl of noodles．（高分句型一）He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks．He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot．At first glance，I think it's a bit funny，for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles．（高分句型二）The man in the picture is trying to copy us．Obviously he is doing it in a hard way．Maybe using one fork will do a better job，In my opinion，we don't need to copy others'ways of thinking．Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．