Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下各图的先后顺序，用英语写一篇日记，记述你周日在小区里扫雪的过程。

注意：1.日记的开头已经为你写好；2. 词数不少于60.

参考词汇: 笤帚 broom 小区 neighbourhood

Sunday January 12 Snowy

This morning, __________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

This morning, when I looked out of the window, I excitedly found it was snowing heavily. Attracted by the beautiful sight, I decided to go out to take some photos. The snow finally stopped at noon, and I couldn’t wait to go outside with my camera. As I walked on the path in front of our building, I saw a boy suddenly slip on the snow-covered ground. It was at that moment that I realized what I should do. Immediately, I ran back home to get a broom and started to sweep the path. I worked so hard that I sweated a lot. An hour later, the thick snow was cleared away. Looking at the clean path, my neighbors all smiled and gave me thumbs up.

I felt very happy that I did something for my neighborhood.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求根据图片写一篇日记，内容是关于你周日在小区里扫雪的过程。写作时注意以下几点：1、认真分析图片提供的信息。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般过去时，以第一人称为主。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如非谓语动词短语Attracted by the beautiful sigh 和Looking at the clean path作状语和强调句式It was at that moment that I realized what I should do.其中还有宾语从句what I should do此外，文章还使用了短语couldn’t wait to go等。As , so ... that的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。