80%支持 | 1、增强体质; 2、培养合作精神; 3、学会如何面对胜负; |
20%反对 | 1、并非是强身健体的唯一形式; 2、容易造成伤害; 3、影响学习. |
你的看法 | (至少两点理由)… |
分析 本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文,主题是"Is sport really good for us?",给出了大部分要点,还要考生给出自己的观点.文章结构清晰,先是运动的好处;然后指出过度运动的坏处;最后是自己的观点,要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点,要求观点明确,驾驭语言的能力强,选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇,也要运用多种句型,让文章更有变化.难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思,可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的.在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来,使文章成为一个整体.
【亮点说明】本文属于正反方观点作文,但是要点给出的不算多,需要考生自己添加部分.在分析部分已经详细说明了.在写作的时候要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点,如First of all,In addition,Plus,What's worse,Besides,For one thing,For another,使他们成为整体.要选择高级的词汇和短语,让文章有变化,有层次,如 does them good,cooperate with,deal with,push themselves hard,hold the opposite view,As far as I'm concerned.在对于诸如此类文章的写作,要善于使用不同的句型,如thus encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies.是非谓语形式,it's a good choice to hold a sports meeting.it's a good way of relaxing ourselves,运用了形式主语.英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达,对于不会表达的意思要学会替换.
First of all,sport helps them build up their strength,keeping them healthy.(高分句型一)
Plus,students can learn to deal with success and failure through competition in the sports meeting,thus encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies.(高分句型二)
However,20%of them hold the opposite view,arguing that sport is not the only way to keep healthy.(高分句型三)
Besides,taking part in the sports meeting,they think,will have a negative effect on their studies.(高分句型四)
解答 Some people like sport while others not in our life.Recently,our school conducted a survey about whether the school should hold a sports meeting or not.Students'opinions are divided on the topic.
80% of the students think sport does them good.First of all,sport helps them build up their strength,keeping them healthy.(高分句型一) In addition,it helps develop students'ability to cooperate with each other.Plus,students can learn to deal with success and failure through competition in the sports meeting,thus encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies.(高分句型二)
However,20% of them hold the opposite view,arguing that sport is not the only way to keep healthy.(高分句型三)What's worse,some of them might get injured in the sports meeting.Besides,taking part in the sports meeting,they think,will have a negative effect on their studies.(高分句型四)
As far as I'm concerned,it's a good choice to hold a sports meeting.For one thing,we can develop team spirit by participating in sports and games.For another,it's a good way of relaxing ourselves,making our school life colorful.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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