Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你收到朋友李磊的来信，他告诉你他不适应高一数学老师的课，在数学方面有些困难，以至于跟不上其他同学，感到非常着急。请给他回复一封电子邮件，想办法解决这方面的困难。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：适应adapt to

Dear Li Lei，

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Lei，

Having received your letter in which you told me that you had trouble adapting to your math teacher, I feel very sorry for you. However, it’s easy to change if you take my advice into consideration.

Firstly, you’d better listen to the teacher carefully in class. You can turn to your math teacher and ask your teacher to explain what you can not understand after class. Secondly, confidence is very important. You should be confident and believe in yourself. Finally, you can communicate with your classmates and get some advice on maths.

Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and make some progress in math.

Best wishes!

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，帮朋友想办法解决问题。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 问候对方，表明写信目的。

2. 具体内容：解决问题的具体办法

1）认真听课，有问题向老师求助；

2）要有自信；

3) 与同学交流。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

adapt to；feel very sorry for sb.；take into consideration；believe in；communicate with；put your heart into；make some progress

第三步：连词成句

1. Having received your letter in which you told me that you had trouble adapting to your math teacher, I feel very sorry for you.

2. it’s easy to change if you take my advice into consideration.

3. you’d better listen to the teacher carefully in class.

4. You can turn to your math teacher and ask your teacher to explain what you can not understand after class.

5. Confidence is very important.

6. You should be confident and believe in yourself.

7. You can communicate with your classmates and get some advice on maths.

8. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.

9. I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and make some progress in math.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause (从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改