Question

【题目】书面表达

本期校报英语专栏的话题是“Modern technology is changing our life”。请结合图片，为校报写一篇英语稿件。内容包括：

1. 描述图片的内容；

2. 分析图片中的现象；

3. 你的看法。

注意: 1. 词数120左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

As the picture shows, many people enjoy playing with their mobile phones even when they are walking, riding a bike or driving a car. Such phenomenon deserves our attention.

Being addicted to playing with mobile phones is harmful to us. First, if we spend too much time on them, we are likely to ignore the people around us. As a matter of fact, many young people lack the communication skills to develop a pleasant relationship with others. Besides, it is dangerous to play with mobile phones while walking, riding or driving, which is a main cause of road accidents.

It is time to reflect on our behavior. The mobile phone is designed to help us communicate with others conveniently, not to spoil our life.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于图画类作文，这类题型的特点是：形象、直观、内容具体，且在图画的前面一般还有文字说明，因此考生一般都有话可写且不会走题。但在写作时应注意的是：仔细阅读图画及文字说明，首先应确定文章体裁；这类文章一般以记叙文或说明文为主。确定人称；确定时态；发挥联想要合理、适度。虚实结合，详略得当。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语As the picture shows,正如图片显示的那样；deserves our attention值得我们关注；Being addicted to短语做主语；be likely to do 可能作某事；As a matter of fact事实上； Besides, it is dangerous to play with mobile phones while walking, riding or driving, which is a main cause of road accidents.这个句子中which引导非限制性定语从句。