Question

【题目】请阅读下面内容, 按照要求写一封书信。

Despite being asked to stay safe during the outbreak(爆发) of the novel coronavirus(新型冠状病毒), students and teachers across the country can keep themselves busy with classes online. A student used a mobile phone to attend an online class at home in the Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region in April. His home was recently connected to the Internet.
DingTalk, a virtual workplace developed by Alibaba Group, held online classes for about 50 million students nationwide, from primary to high school level. Physics teacher Zhao Chuanliang gave an online class to his students at Henan Experimental Middle School in Zhengzhou on Sunday.

（写作内容）假设你是李华，按照要求，用英语给英语老师写一封信，汇报今年寒假期间的网络课程学习情况，内容包括:

1.你和同学在网络课程期间的真实表现，包括上课与平时作息等；

2.寒假网络课程期间父母如何关心你的学习； 3.这次网络课程给你的感受。

（写作要求） 1.词数为120左右，写三段；

2.书信开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；

3.不能直接引用原文语句，作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

（评分标准） 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

Dear Sir,

I am writing to report my online lessons.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

I am writing to report my online lessons.

From Monday through Friday, I got up at seven and logged onto DingTalk to attend online lessons. I was active in communicating with teachers, for they couldn’t see me online. Some of my classmates, though, paid little attention to courses, busy chatting or posting messages or clicking likes during live-streaming lessons.

My parents were under pressure as they wanted to monitor me at home to ensure I was not distracted by games while attending online classes. Now I am at school and their life is back to normal.

Online courses are as effective as face-to-face lessons at school. For me, every minute of the online courses counts, since the national college entrance examination, determining which university I can attend, may have lifelong consequences.

Thank you for reading my letter. Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于读写任务，要求考生写一封汇报，说明今年寒假期间的网络课程学习情况。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。

结构：总分法

总分法指先点出写信目的，再逐点进行汇报。

要求：

1.写信目的

2.网课期间自己和同学的表现

3.父母对自己学习的关心

4.自己的感受

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

log onto，online lessons，be active in, pay little attention to, busy doing sth, under pressure, distract, back to normal, effective, face-to-face lessons, national college entrance examination, consequence

第三步：连词成句

1. I got up at seven and logged onto DingTalk to attend online lessons

2. I was active in communicating with teachers…

3. Some of my classmates, though, paid little attention to courses, busy chatting…

4. My parents were under pressure as they wanted to monitor me at home to ensure I was not distracted by games while attending online classes.

5. their life is back to normal…

6. Online courses are as effective as face-to-face lessons at school.

7. since the national college entrance examination, determining which university I can attend, may have lifelong consequences

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改