Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李夏，现就读于某外国语学校。你们学校留学部为庆祝元旦的到来，准备举办一场英语话剧(drama)表演，现正面向全校招募（recruit）演员，你对此非常感兴趣。请你用英文给负责人Miss Green写一封申请信。内容要点;1. 说明写信的缘由；2.说明你的兴趣，爱好；3.介绍个人的优势和表演经历；4.表达渴望被录取的愿望。

注意：1. 词数100左右。开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Miss Green,

I’m Li Xia, a Senior 3 student.

Look forward to receiving your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Xia

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Miss Green,

I’m Li Xia, a Senior 3 student. I have learned you are recruiting actors for the English drama for this New Year’s Day. So I’m writing to apply for one of the roles in the drama. I like performing very much and it’s my dream to become an actor. When I was a little child, I liked to act in front of others, such as singing, dancing and telling jokes. Besides this, I was a member of my Junior Middle School’s drama club and acted in several dramas, receiving praise for my performance from teachers and classmates.

I hope I can play a part in the English drama and I would appreciate it if you could give me this chance. And I’m sure I am qualified for a part.

Look forward to receiving your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Xia

【解析】

本文是一篇申请信。是关于李夏想要参加当话剧演员而给负责人格林小姐写的一封申请信。写作前首先要审题，审明题目的主要大意，如本文中主要讲述了立夏因为要参加话剧演员这一角色而想给主办方格林小姐写一封申请信；其次就是看题目中给出的注意点，根据注意的点进行文章的脉络罗列。此作文主要分成三个部分：第一部分讲明了写信的缘由并且介绍了自己；第二部分介绍了自己的一些优势；最后表达自己希望担任这一话剧角色的诚心。文章的脉络清晰，用词简明但新颖。同学们在写作前，先打提纲有助于文章的书写，并且注意控制字数，避免错词错句的出现。