Question

你们班同学打算周六去爬香山。请给外教Chris写一封英文信，邀请他参加此次活动。具体内容如下：
1. 时间：8 am—5 pm；
2. 集合地点：校门口；
3. 交通工具：公交车；
4. 携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
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Yours,
Joe

Answer 1

Dear Chris，
We are planning to climb the Xiangshan Hill this Saturday and sincerely invite you to go with us.
We will get together at the school gate at 8 am and probably come back at 5 pm. To make it a green travel, we will take the bus there. You’d better take your camera to record the beautiful scenery. And don’t forget to take some food, because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill. Remember, take your umbrella or raincoat in case it rains.
If you can join us, we will be very happy.
Yours,
Joe

解析试题分析：本题是一篇应用文。作文要点已经给出，可以分段分别论述所给要点，注意作文的连贯性，做到流畅、自然。最好使用第一人称和一般现在时来写。
【亮点说明】范文中运用到一些常用短语had better do sth最好做某事；in case以防；To make it a green travel, we will take the bus there.这个句子中把目的状语放在开始表示强调；And don’t forget to take some food, because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill用了否定的祈使句与原因状语从句。
考点： 提纲类作文