Question

短文改错。
      增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
      删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
      修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
      注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
                  2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

editor,
     I'm writing to tell you something about how we students use the Internet. As we all know, the Internet is
playing a important part in our daily life. We often read news at home and abroad and learning foreign languages by ourselves on the Internet. Sometimes we sent e-mails to our families as well as our friends. Beside, we
listen music, enjoy films and play computer games on it. We can even do shopping without leaving our homes.
     However, it has its disadvantages. We waste too much time playing the electronic games, that has a bad
effect on our studies. What's worse, the bad information on the Internet do great harm to them. I hope we can make the use of the Internet proper for our studies.
                                                                                                                            Yours truly
                                                                                                                               Zhang Hua
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Answer 1

editor,
     I'm writing to tell you something about how we students use the Internet. As we all know, the Internet is
playing a important part in our daily life. We often read news at home and abroad and learning foreign languages
        1. an                                                                                                           2. learn
by ourselves on the Internet. Sometimes we sent e-mails to our families as well as our friends. Beside, we listen
                                                            3. send                                                              4. besides
∧ music, enjoy films and play computer games on it. We can even do shopping without leaving our homes.
5. to
     However, it has its disadvantages. We waste too much time playing the electronic games, that has a bad 
                                                                                                                                 6. which
effect on our studies. What's worse, the bad information on the Internet do great harm to them. I hope we can
                                                                                                    7. does                  8. us
make the use of the Internet proper for our studies.
    9 .  去掉the               10. properly                                                                         Yours truly
                                                                                                                               Zhang Hua