[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除: 把多余的词用斜线\划掉.修改: 在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线\划掉。

修改: 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分

Dear Peter,

From your letter I have known that you and your family plans to go to the Disneyland in Shanghai. I am willing to tell you something about it.

The Disneyland was open to the public on June 16, 2016, where you can enjoyed a magical world. As for the ticket, the price for an adult is 370 yuan per person, while a child under 7 only needs to pay for 185 yuan. Besides, I have some advices for you. Consider the food in the park is extreme expensive, you should take some snacks and water. On addition, you are supposed to wear sports shoes, that can make your visit more enjoyable.

Wish you happy visit. If you had any question, don’t hesitate to turn to me.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【答案】1. plans→plan

2. enjoyed→enjoy

3. pay for 中for删除

4. advices→advice

5. Consider→Considering

6. extreme→extremely

7. On→In

8. that→which

9. happy visit前加a

10. had→have

【解析】

这是李华写给彼得的一封信。在信中，李华得知彼得和他的家人将要去上海的迪士尼乐园玩，李华为彼得详细介绍了旅游攻略。

第一处：考查主谓一致。主语“你和你的家人”是复数，谓语动词不用第三人称单数，所以plans改为plan。

第二处：考查情态动词。can是一个情态动词，情态动词后，用动词原形，所以enjoyed改为enjoy。

第三处：考查动词的用法。pay用作及物动词时，意思是“支付”，宾语可以是“人”、“钱”；pay for中的pay为不及物动词，其宾语多为物，即pay for sth.，意为“付款买某物”，其宾语为人时，即pay for sb.，意为“替某人付款。”题干中意思是“一个七岁以下的孩子仅需要支付185元”，所以pay for 中for删除。

第四处：考查名词单复数。句意：此外，我还有一些建议给你。advice是不可数名词，所以advices改为advice。

第五处：考查非谓语动词。Consider的逻辑主语是you，它们之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词作原因状语，Consider改为Considering。

第六处：考查副词。expensive是一个形容词，需要用副词修饰形容词，所以extreme改为extremely。

第七处：考查固定短语。句意：此外，你应该穿运动鞋，这会使得你的旅行更加愉快。in addition此外，该短语是固定短语，所以On改为In。

第八处：考查定语从句。which can make your visit more enjoyable.作定语，修饰整个句子，所以which can make your visit more enjoyable.是一个定语从句，关系词在从句中作主语，指代整个主句内容，只能用which，所以that改为which。

第九处：考查冠词。句意：祝你有一次快乐的旅行。题干中泛指“一次快乐的旅行”，happy的首字母发音是辅音，用不定冠词a，所以happy visit前加a。

第十处：考查时态。if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时态、祈使句或情态动词，从句要用现在时态，所以had改为have。

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