Question

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
The Use of Examinations
A good education should make people think for themselves. But the exam can never do anything like that.
First, examinations are second to none because it brings anxiety to students. As soon as a child begins school, he enters a world of terrible competition.
Second, exams do not interest students to read or to learn widely. They do not help students to look for more and more knowledge, but try to put as much as possible into the students’ head.
Third, they lower the standards of teaching, for they do not give any freedom to teachers to decide what to teach. Teachers themselves have no choice but to train their students in exam techniques. The most successful students are not always the best educated but the best trained in the technique of exams.
Fourth, they can tell you nothing about a person’s true ability. The exams are often nothing more than a subjective assessment(主观评价) by some examiners.
However, if there are no exams, few students or even no one will do any revision or study!
【写作内容】
概括短文的内容要点，该部分的词数大约30；
就“中学生学习成绩与能力的相互关系”为题发表你的看法，至少包括以下的内容要点，该部分的词数大约120。
(1) 你每次考试之前的心情如何？
你是如何备考的?
你认为考试成绩能反映你的学习能力吗？
【写作要求】
你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
【评分标准】
概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。

Answer 1

Exams make students feel nervous and can neither show students’ true abilities nor help them to learn more knowledge. To deal with exams, teachers have to train students in exam techniques.
Before exams I am always full of anxiety. Most of the time I can’t help thinking about the exams, which make me sleep badly. I know it is not good for exams, but I have no way to control myself.
During the day when I am preparing for exams, I try my best to go over all the lessons we have learned and at the mean time, I carefully review all the notes that were taken in the classes.
I think the result of exams can reflect our ability to learn to some extent. Exams can force or encourage us to study hard. We obtain various knowledge by studying different kinds of subjects. Knowledge is power and this power can help us to develop our ability to learn.

解析试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮点说明】范文概括精当，观点明确，不乏好的词组和句子，如：neither …nor….，既不，也不，full of anxiety 充满焦虑，have no way to do没有办法做…，to some extent到某些程度，To deal with exams, teachers have to train students in exam techniques.这句话用了目的状语， Most of the time I can’t help thinking about the exams, which make me sleep badly. 这句话用了定语从句，During the day when I am preparing for exams, I try my best to go over all the lessons we have learned and at the mean time, I carefully review all the notes that were taken in the classes. 这句话用了定语从句， Knowledge is power and this power can help us to develop our ability to learn.这句话用了谚语。
考点：考查读写类书面表达