Question

19．将要进入高三，许多同学面临高考，懂得努力学习；同时，心理压力增加，与父母、同学关系紧张，容易发怒，甚至为小事与同学争吵等．
针对这种情况，谈谈你的看法并提出改进意见．
要点：
1．目前情况；
2．个人的改进意见（至少两条）．
注意：
1．开头已给出（不记入总词数）；
2.120个词左右．
We are becoming students of Senior Grade Three．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We find it difficult to get along well with our classmates，teachers and even parents．
高分句型二：
Besides，talking with teachers and parents with respect is a good way to reduce pressure，and they will give us some good advice in time．
句型一 We find it difficult to get along well with our classmates 该句中有使用到it，it在该句中是一个形式宾语，真正的宾语为不定式：to get along well
句型二 talking with teachers and parents with respect is a..该句的主语为动名词短语充当，动名词以及动名词短语充当主语应注意，谓语使用单数

解答 We are  becoming students of Senior Grade Three． All of us will face the fierce competition in the Entrance Examination for college next year．Most of us students know the importance of revisions and preparations．We work hard at our lessons．Meanwhile，some are suffering from gre ater tension/pressure than ever．We find it difficult to get along well with our classmates，teachers and even parents．（情况说明）（高分句型一）It is easy for us to lose our temper and quarrels often break out over something important．
    Personally，we should try to change the situations as well as ourselves．Anyway，competitions do exist in our life．We should learn to adjust to them rather than escape．Calming down in face of difficulty can win us a more peaceful mind．Besides，talking with teachers and parents with respect is a good way to reduce pressure，and they will give us some good advice in time．（高分句型二）Taking more exercise outdoors can also help us relax．
   In short，we should learn to keep the balance between study and relaxation and try to make our life meaningful and happy．（个人意见）

点评 该书面表达为开放类，该类作文一般没有具体的写作要点，写作时考生可以在合理的范围内发散思维．另外考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．