Question

【题目】假定你是李华，计划十一和同学一起去爬贺兰山。请你给外教Nancy 写一封邮件，邀请她一同前往。Helan Moutain贺兰山

内容包括：

1.集合时间及其地点；

2.活动安排及提醒；

3.午餐及返程时间。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Nancy,

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Nancy,

My classmates and I are planning to climbing Helan Mountain on October 1st. We all hope you can join us. Here is the schedule.

We are to meet at the school gate at 8 o’clock on October 1st.Since we will climbing mountains ,you’d better wear comfortable clothes and shoes. If necessary, you can wear your sunglasses. Besides,we’ll have a picnic on the top of the mountain,everyone is expected to bring their lunch and share it. We may return at around 4 o’clock in the afternoon.

Would you like to join us? Hope to see you then.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，计划十一和同学一起去爬贺兰山。请你给外教Nancy 写一封邮件，邀请她一同前往HelanMoutain贺兰山。内容包括：

1.集合时间及其地点；2.活动安排及提醒；3.午餐及返程时间。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：planning to climbing（计划爬）；Here is the schedule.（这是时刻表。）；at the school gate（在校门口）；if necessary（如果必要）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。