Question

10．请根据图写一篇100-120个词的短文．你的短文应包括下列要点
1．简要描写图画内容；
2．解释该图画的内涵
3．谈谈你个人的看法
注意：1．短文的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）：
2．参考词汇：psychological quality心理素质：moral character品德
Should We Ignore Quality Education？
As is vividly shown in the picture above，                                              ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
     As is vividly shown in the picture above，a child is struggling for full marks in school subjects，which is strongly supported by his family members．
   本句中as引导的为一非限制性定语从句，as在从句中作主语；后面又包含which引导的非限制性定语从句，struggle for…为…而奋斗；be supposed by sb受到某人的支持．
高分句型二
     This picture mirrors a common social phenomenon setting us thinking．
   本句中包含非谓语动词的用法，setting us thinking为现在分词短语作定语．mirror在这里用作动词，意为"反应"．
 高分句型三
     it's necessary that the Department of Education stress the significance of quality education and above all put it into practice
  本句为主从复合句，其中it为形式主语，that引导的为一主语从句，above all首先，最重要的是．

解答 Should We Ignore Quality Education？
As is vividly shown in the picture above，a child is struggling for full marks in school subjects，which is strongly supported by his family members．（高分句型）But he ignores the more important aspects such as psychological quality and moral character．（高分句型）（指出存在问题）
This picture mirrors a common social phenomenon setting us thinking．（高分句型）Academic achievements are not all that a student needs．Without a good psychological quality，we often fail to face ups and downs in life bravely．Besides，we can't make contributions to society with a low moral standard．（分析现象）
Therefore，immediate measures must be taken to reverse the misleading trend．Students and parents are supposed to take a correct attitude towards grades．Meanwhile，it's necessary that the Department of Education stress the significance of quality education and above all put it into practice（高分句型）（提出对策）

点评 本文是图画类写作，考生在写作前应仔细观察所给图画，再运用准确的、合适的语言结合实际将图片内容描述清楚．写作过程中切忌偏离主题，尽量做到图文搭配