Question

【题目】假如你是李明，你的学校里来了一位英国交换生保罗。他在和你的交谈中表示在中国学习压力很大。请你给他写封信，提些建议。(100 words or so)

【写作内容】将自己的问题告诉老师和同学，请求得到他们的帮助；不要总想着考试成绩，多想想自己在哪些方面进步了，这样就会给自己自信；多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力（relieve one’s stress），并且有助睡眠。

Paul,

I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Paul, I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. I suggest you communicate your trouble to your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them. You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out. Instead, you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence. In addition, I advise you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress, because sports will also help you sleep better at night.

I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】本文是一篇信件类作文。要求以李明的名义写一封信给英国交换生保罗，建议他如何在中国学习中减压。考生在成文时应注意：合理发挥想象力，使文章的表达自然，丰满。文章的写作要点要齐全：1、将自己的问题告诉老师和同学，请求得到他们的帮助；2、不要总想着考试成绩，多想想自己在哪些方面进步了，这样就会给自己自信；3、多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力（relieve one’s stress），并且有助睡眠。注意文章的人称：以第二人称为主。时态：一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇so as to，are not supposed to，Instead，In addition， get out of和句型，以提高文章的档次；恰当使用一些连词、插入语，使文章表达自然，流畅。注意次数：80—120之间。

【范文亮点】①You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out.②you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence都运用了定语从句。