Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国网友Henry对中国的太极拳(Tai Chi)很感兴趣，来信向你询问相关事宜。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1. 中国武术，以动作平衡著称；

2. 有益于身体健康及精神放松；

3. 建议他学习太极拳。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：武术martial art

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Henry,

It is glad to know that you are interested in Tai Chi. I feel greatly honored to tell you something about it.

Tai Chi is an ancient Chinese martial art, which is famous for its well-balanced movements. In addition, what is widely acknowledged is that it functions as an effective health exercise. What’s more, not only can it make people physically healthy, but also it provides the mental relaxation, which is very necessary in our modern stressful lives.

Since you show great preference for it, I strongly recommend that you learn it. You will find yourself fitter and more energetic after learning it.

I am sure you will enjoy learning it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达要求写一封信，属于应用文，也是提纲类短文。

第1步：审题。根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；你的英国网友Henry对中国的太极拳(Tai Chi)很感兴趣，来信向你询问相关事宜。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：确定要点。介绍与太极拳相关的知识：（1）中国武术，以动作平衡著称；（2）有益于身体健康及精神放松；（3）建议他学习太极拳。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

范文分为四部分，显得条理清楚。文章第一部分介绍Henry对中国的太极拳(Tai Chi)很感兴趣，来信向你询问相关事宜。第二部分与太极拳相关的知识，本部分中作者运用了较多的高级结构，如定语从句which is famous for its well-balanced movements.部分倒装句not only can it make people physically healthy；同时作者还合理使用串联词，如in addition，what’s more等，这些串联词让各要点成为了一个整体。