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2．假如你是李华，最近从email得知你的笔友Tom因缺乏锻炼和不均衡的饮食习惯而生病在家，心里很烦躁．请给Tom写封信安慰他，并就健康的生活习惯提出你的看法．
注意：1．词数100左右
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
      ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
First of all，you had better have a good sleep every day so that you can be active and energetic during the day．
首先，你最好有一个良好的睡眠每一天，这样你可以在白天活动和活力．
高分句型二：
You need not worry about your study since you are a hard-working boy，and I am sure you will recover soon．
你不需要对你的学习担心，因为你是一个勤奋的男孩，我相信你会很快恢复．

解答 Dear Tom，
I am sad to hear that you have been ill in bed for days．I know from your email that it is because you don't exercise enough and keep a balanced diet that you get ill．Therefore，I suggest you give up your unhealthy lifestyle and live a healthy life．
First of all，you had better have a good sleep every day so that you can be active and energetic during the day（高分句型一）．Secondly，you should eat more fruit and vegetables and drink more water．Do not eat too much junk food as they are not good for your health．Above all，you should spend more time doing exercise and less time playing computer games．
You need not worry about your study since you are a hard-working boy，and I am sure you will recover soon（高分句型二）．
                                                                    Yours，
                                                                    Li Lua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．