Question

近来，中国不少城市受到雾霾天气(haze)的影响，这给人们的日常生活带来了严重的影响。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。

1．描述这一现象及其成因（私家车越来越多，工厂污染严重……）；

2．带来的危害（交通事故频繁，身体问题多……）；

3．我们应该……

注意：1. 开头已给出，不计入总数；

2. 词数：100字左右；

3. 必须包括提供的内容要点，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯。

4. 参考词汇：污染 pollution

Recently, haze has become very common in some major cities in China.

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Recently, haze has become very common in some major cities in China. Actually, it is caused by many factors, such as the increase of cars and the factories’ pollution.

As a result, there are a series of disadvantages in our daily life. On the one hand, it affects the traffic safety. Especially low vision in hazy weather can easily cause traffic jams and traffic accidents. On the other hand, more and more people have to go to see the doctor under this environment for a long time.

Therefore, it’s high time that people all over the country should take measures to reduce it. To begin with, we can go out wearing a mask if possible. Then, the number of cars should be limited. What’s more, drinking more water and building up our bodies are also beneficial to us. I firmly believe that as long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生以雾霾为主题写一篇文章。考生要根据所给的三个方面的要点写作。三个要点分别为：现象及其成因（私家车越来越多，工厂污染严重……）；带来的危害（交通事故频繁，身体问题多……）；我们应该做的事情。因此文章的脉络十分清晰，考生要根据这三个方面进行描述。根据描述可知文章主要时态应为一般现在时。写作时要注意正确使用连接词，使文章通顺连贯。此外，还要运用多种句式和高级词汇来提高文章档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达使用了三段式结构，先介绍了雾霾在中国城市的现状，接着介绍了雾霾的影响，最后提出了一些解决方法。文章脉络清晰，连接词使用使文章流畅连贯，如on the one hand……，on the other hand……；therefore；to begin with；then；what’s more等的使用。文章还使用了多种句式，如it’s high time that…是虚拟语气的运用；I firmly believe that…是宾语从句的运用。这都为文章增色不少。

考点：考查提纲作文