Question

【题目】假如你是李华，近日目睹了一次严重的交通事故：一名小男孩因闯红灯被车撞受伤。此事引发了你对交通安全的思考。请根据以下要点给校英语报社投稿。

1.存在的问题；

2.造成的后果；

3.提出建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor:

I’m Li Hua, a senior school student. I want to say something about the traffic problems. Recently, I witnessed that a boy ran the red light and was injured by a speedy car. What a pity!

I noticed that more and more traffic accidents happened on the road, most of which resulted from people’s breaking the traffic rules, such as disobeying traffic signals and moving on regardless of speed limits. When accidents happen, what we lose is not only time and money but health or even our lives. The problem of traffic safety is an urgent on because it concerns the safety of all of us.

So the government should carry out effective management of the traffic systems and everyone should raise the awareness of traffic safety and strictly obey the traffic rules.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先审题，假如你是李华，近日目睹了一次严重的交通事故：一名小男孩因闯红灯被车撞受伤。此事引发了你对交通安全的思考。请根据以下要点给校英语报社投稿。1.存在的问题；2.造成的后果；3.提出建议。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如Recently, I witnessed that a boy ran the red light and was injured by a speedy car.这里含有一个宾语从句。I noticed that more and more traffic accidents happened on the road, most of which resulted from people’s breaking the traffic rules, such as disobeying traffic signals and moving on regardless of speed limits.这里含有一个宾语从句和一个非限制性定语从句。