Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校将于下周举行“40公里徒步活动”。请你代表学生会写一封电子邮件给你校外籍教师Peter，邀请他参加本次徒步活动。内容包括：

1．向他发出邀请；

2．介绍本次徒步活动；

3．活动注意事项。

40公里徒步活动：a 40-km hiking trip

注意：

1．词数l00左右：

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3．开头结尾已经给出

Dear Peter,

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

On behalf of the Student’Union, I am writing to sincerely invite you to join in the 40-km hiking trip to be held next week.

Aimed at enriching our experiences and exercising our willpower, this activity is scheduled to take place from7:00 am，to 5:00 pm，next Tuesday. All the students and staff in Senior 3 will gather on the playground at 6:30 am, attending a brief opening ceremony. We will walk 20 kilometers along the Dongjiang River before we make a return trip to school. If we are lucky enough to have you join us, please bear it in mind that you should wear a pair of sneakers that fit well. The wrong shoes may hurt your feet.

Hopefully, you will accept my invitation if it is convenience to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文写作。

第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你校将于下周举行“40公里徒步活动”。请你代表学生会写一封电子邮件给你校外籍教师Peter，邀请他参加本次徒步活动。内容包括：1．向他发出邀请；2．介绍本次徒步活动；3．活动注意事项。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：a 40-km hiking trip（40公里徒步活动）；sincerely invite（诚挚地邀请）；Aim at（旨在）；willpower（意志力）；be scheduled to（预定；安排）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。