Question

1．A man realized he needed to purchase a hearing aid．And he went to a store．"How much do they cost？"he asked the clerk．
"That depends，"said the salesman．"They range from US2toUS2，000．"
As he was unwilling to spend a lot of money on it，the man was interested in the US2model，andasked，"CanIhavealookattheUS2model？"
The clerk put the device around the man's neck．"You just stick this button in your ear and run this little string down to your pocket，"he instructed．
"How does it work？"the man asked．
"For US$2，it doesn't work，"the salesman replied．"But when people see it on you，they will pay attention．And listen to you!"
As we all know，most communication problems are not due to people talking too softly．Unfortunately，it is because we are not always good listeners．
Do you know that people will pay hundreds of dollars an hour，for no other reason than to have someone listen to them？We all need someone to listen to us，and to listen well to people is to respond to a great human need．
[写作内容]
1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容．
2．以约120个词谈谈"倾听的作用"，内容包括：
（1）这则故事带给你的启示；
（2）通过事例或你的经历阐述倾听的重要性；
（3）我们应该怎样有效地进行交流．
[写作要求]
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
Through the story of a man buying a hearing aid that doesn‘t work just to make people pay attention to him，the passage shows that nowadays people seldom spend time listening to others．
AfterI readthe story，it struck me that we should spend more time listening to others--one of the most important things that we can do in communication．
Listening to others brings about better understanding．I learned that from my mother．Once she took me to lunch； instead of asking questions about my grades and school life，she just sat there and listened to me attentively．She told me that through my words she saw my desire and determination．Her listening made me feel understood，which has improved our relationship．
Therefore，mastering the art of listening will contribute to effective communication with others．Let‘s take the opportunity to remember what really matters and communicate with others from the heart．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
 After I read the story，it struck me that （1）we should spend more time listening（2）to others．读完这个故事，我突然领悟到我们应该花更多的时间倾听他人．
（1）It struck/hit/occurred to sb．that表示"某人突然想到…"，其中it 是形式主语，that引导的是主语从句．
（2）spend some time doing sth表示"花时间做…"
句型二：
Her listening made me feel understood，which has improved our relationship．她的倾听让我觉得被理解，这改善了我们之间的关系．
which引导了非限制性定语从句，指代整个主句．
句型三：
mastering the art of listening（1）will contribute to （2）effective communication with others．掌握倾听的艺术有助于与他人有效地进行交流．
（1）mastering the art of listening为动名词做主语．
（2）contribute to促进，导致

解答 Through the story of a man buying a hearing aid that doesn‘t work just to make people pay attention to him，the passage shows that nowadays people seldom spend time listening to others（短文概括）．
    After I read the story，it struck me that we should spend more time listening to others【高分句型一】--one of the most important things that we can do in communication（启示）．
    Listening to others brings about better understanding．I learned that from my mother．Once she took me to lunch； instead of asking questions about my grades and school life，she just sat there and listened to me attentively．She told me that through my words she saw my desire and determination．Her listening made me feel understood，which has improved our relationship【高分句型二】（倾听的事例）．
    Therefore，mastering the art of listening will contribute to effective communication with others【高分句型三】．Let‘s take the opportunity to remember what really matters and communicate with others from the heart（通过倾听进行有效交流）．

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点．其次要考虑高分词语和句型的选用，从句、非谓语动词、倒装、强调句型等都是可考虑的高级句型；词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．