Question

最近，你班同学就“父母是不是最好的老师”这一话题展开讨论，有些人认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，介绍讨论结果以及你的个人观点。

观点 原因	同意	不完全同意
1	教会如何生活	过分溺爱
2	指出缺点，指明方向	强加兴趣、价值观
3	教会富有爱心	希望值过高

要求：1、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯。

2、词数：120词左右。3、开头已给出，不计人单词总数。

Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers . Some students                                                                   

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers . Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life . What’s more, parents’ love helps to teach them how to love others, So parents are their most important teachers .

However, not all of us hold the views, Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. More-over , their parents some times expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.

In my opinion , parents are our important teachers , But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the generation gap .

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于考生比较熟悉的正反观点类议论文，也就是关于一个话题的两种不同的态度，支持的或者反对的。本文的要点都已经给出来了，考生需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点都连接起来，使之成为一个整体。如for one hand, for anther, what’s more等，这些连接词可以让文章更为流畅。也要使用一些高级的句型如定语从句，倒装句等让文章富有变化，不要那么死板。在选词的时候，要选择4,5个高级的词汇或者短语，可以提升文章的层次。

考点：考查正反观点类议论文的写作

点评：本文仍然属于提纲类作文，也属于议论文。本类文章有模板可套用，关键在于要点的完备，不能遗漏。另外文章中要有亮点，如本文的连接词的使用就很合理。。