Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你们学校将要举办“中华经典文学诵读比赛”(Chinese Classics Reciting Contest)，你的英国好友Peter对中国文化很感兴趣，请你根据以下信息，给他写一封信，邀请他参加比赛。

要点如下：

1. 举办时间和地点；

2. 朗诵内容与形式；

3. 期待参与。

注意：

1. 词数：100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

A Chinese Classics Reciting Contest will be hosted in my school. Knowing that you are really into Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to participate in it.

The contest will be held in the school lecture hall from 2:00 to 4:00 on the afternoon of April 15. All the competitors are required to read Chinese poems or essays within five minutes. Besides, the forms of the activity could be various, which involves reading or reciting on your own, in pairs or groups. The prizes will go to the top five students. I’m sure it would be great fun and beneficial to your language learning. Hope you can join us.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文为材料作文中的邀请信。邀请信在形式上一般具有简短、热情的特点。通常适用于一些平常的事情的邀请，而且邀请人同被邀请人之间很熟悉。这类文章的结构如下：第一， 说明与收信人的相关性与写作意图；第二，写清邀请的时间（年、月、日、钟点）、地点、场合；第三，具体交代情景；第四， 表示期待朋友的回复。在遣词造句方面，注意使用一些高级词汇和较复杂的句型结构，以增强文章的逻辑性，提高文章得分等级。

亮点说明：本文格式正确，内容完整，行文连贯。主动语态与被动语态相结合。使用了非谓语作状语（Knowing that you are really into Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to participate in it.be beneficial to）运用了多种句式，如which引导的定语从句（…the forms of the activity could be various, which involves reading or reciting on your own, in pairs or groups，名词从句（I’m sure it would be great fun and beneficial to your language learning.）等。同时还运用了许多高级词汇，如：participate in，various,on your own，Look forward to等。此外，还恰当使用语句间的连接成分，如beside等，增强了文章的逻辑性，提高文章得分等级，为文章增添了亮点。