Question

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2，只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I

scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,

since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and

shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to

helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel

every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

Answer 1

Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me.

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scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could∧ relieve my pressure. So it was useless,

screamed                          to                 But

since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized

however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and  

       great

shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to

               Besides

helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel

help

every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

                                              brightly

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