Question

16．假定你是李华，今年高考结束后，你打算和同学们为某贫困山区的孩子们举行一次捐赠活动．请给你的外教露西写封邮件，希望她能参加，内容包括：
1．捐赠的时间和地点：2016年6月10日上午，校体育馆；
2．捐赠的物品及意义等．
注意：
1．词数100左右
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．结束语以为你写好，不计入总词数．
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Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                Yours，
                                                                Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封邀请函．写作时，首先要写清要点，包括：活动的背景，具体时间和地点，活动的内容和意义；其次要注意以第一人称来表达；最后要注意时态以一般现在时态为主．
重点短语和句型：
live a hard life 生活困难
call on 号召
be willing to do sth 愿意做某事
make a difference 起作用，有影响
we do hope all of us will try our best to do something for them．
句中do位于谓语动词前，强调谓语，是一个强调句．
we'll collect some clothes，books or even money in the gym，which will be sent to the poor areas later．
句中which引导非限制性定语从句．
not only will the children enjoy a happy life but also they'll have a good education．
句中not only…but also…连接并列句，not only位于句首时，句中要部分倒装．

解答 Dear Lucy，
At present，there are many children in the poor areas still living a hard life．They don't have enough food to eat or clothes to wear．Furthermore，they can't afford to attend school．In order to call on everyone to help the poor children in the mountainous areas，we do hope all of us will try our best to do something for them．（高分句型一）（介绍活动背景）
 On the morning of June 10th，2016，we'll collect some clothes，books or even money in the gym，which will be sent to the poor areas later．（高分句型二）If you are willing to donate something to the poor children，do come to the gym in time．（说明活动内容和时间地点）
With your help，not only will the children enjoy a happy life but also they'll have a good education．（高分句型三）Meanwhile，you'll feel happy by making a difference．I hope you can take part in the activity．Thank you!（说明活动意义并发出邀请）
Yours
Li Hua

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．