Question

【题目】近日，湖北襄阳一小学将广场舞作为课间操并纳入学校的校本课程。此事在你校学生中引起广泛讨论。请你结合下表用英语写一篇150词左右的短文。

	70%的学生赞成	30%的学生不赞成	你的观点
理由	1. 放松身心，塑造体型； 2. 欣赏音乐，锻炼身体；	1. 广场舞是大妈舞； 2. 运动量不足；	…… ……

注意：

1）作文应涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥，注意衔接与连贯。

2）词数120词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

3）作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

广场舞: square dancing 大妈：Dama

Recently, a primary school in Xiangyang, Hubei province has added square dancing to their curriculum ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Recently, a primary school in Xiangyang, Hubei province has added square dancing to their curriculum, which caused a heated discussion in our school. Students have different views on it.

70% of the students are in favor of it, holding that not only can square dancing help them relax themselves but also it can make them have a slim figure. What’s more, music dance combined with physical exercise is a good way for teenagers to get into shape. However, 30% of the students have the opposite opinion that square dancing is the dance of Dama, which requires less energy. Thus, it is not a good choice for them.

On a personal note, I have strong desire to learn square dancing with classmates in school, for traditional gymnastics is too boring to inspire the students’ enthusiasm for working out. In addition, students can learn to cooperate with each other. Maybe this would be a way to build the school spirit with an activity that many students enjoy.

【解析】近日，湖北襄阳一小学将广场舞作为课间操并纳入学校的校本课程。此事在你校学生中引起广泛讨论。要求用150词左右的短文来描述这些讨论和自己的观点。文章用一般现在时来写，用第三人称和第一人称。主要包括三部分：首先交代背景和讨论主题；然后重点说明学生们赞成或不赞成的理由；最后表明自己对此事的观点。

写作时要条理清楚，观点明确，要点全面。另外需要注意高级词汇和句型的运用为文章提分，如定语从句which caused a heated discussion in our school. which requires less energy.和that many students enjoy.宾语从句that not only can square dancing help them relax themselves but also it can make them have a slim figure.同位语从句that square dancing is the dance of Dama.