Question

9．某中学英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论课堂纪律的问题，请结合自身的实际，按以下提示，用英文给该专栏写一篇稿件．
     1、列举两种或以上违反课堂纪律的情形；
     2、指出其危害；
     3、提出解决纪律问题的措施（包括老师和学生）
注意：
1．词数：120左右；开头已为你写出，不计入总词数；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
     Good class discipline ensures that every student learns well in class．However，very often we notice students disobey rules．Occasionally some students eat snacks while listening to the teacher，or when tired，they fall asleep in class．What's worse，some students even talk loudly with others，making it difficult for the students to hear the teacher clearly．
Listening to the teacher attentively in class is the major way we gain knowledge．If we do not focus our attention and take careful notes，we may miss many important points，or worse still，we may not be able to understand at all．A noisy class is just an unacceptable mess．
To solve the problem，I think the teacher should first shoulder the responsibility and be strict with everyone．Also，students are supposed to realize the importance of good discipline．Whoever breaks a rule in class should be punished．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文，根据所给要点写一篇稿件，结合自身的实际阐述课堂纪律的问题．写作要点：1．列举两种或以上违反课堂纪律的情形；2．指出其危害；3．提出解决纪律问题的措施（包括老师和学生）．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第一人称为主．时态以一般现在时为主．重要短语：fall asleep （睡觉…），listen to the teacher （听老师上课…），focus one's attention （集中注意力），shoulder the responsibility（承担责任），be strict with sb（对…严格），be supposed to do…（应该做某事）．

解答 Good class discipline ensures that every student learns well in class． However，very often we notice students disobey rules．Occasionally some students eat snacks while listening to the teacher，or when tired，they fall asleep in class．What's worse，some students even talk loudly with others，making it difficult for the students to hear the teacher clearly．【高分句型】（列举两种或以上违反课堂纪律的情形）
Listening to the teacher attentively in class is the major way we gain knowledge．【高分句型】If we do not focus our attention and take careful notes，we may miss many important points，or worse still，we may not be able to understand at all．A noisy class is just an unacceptable mess．（指出其危害）
To solve the problem，I think the teacher should first shoulder the responsibility and be strict with everyone．Also，students are supposed to realize the importance of good discipline．Whoever breaks a rule in class should be punished．【高分句型】（提出解决纪律问题的措施）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．